Finish this story... "I was walking in the woods and suddenly...."
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I was walking in the woods and suddenly...
I saw a BIG FAT UGLY SMELLY TROLL! I tried to run but I tripped over a log and fell!
I saw a harry green thing it was a harry troll. The troll really mad i started to run but the troll was on my heels.I finally got to my house.
I was walking in the woods and suddenly... I saw a BIG FAT STINKY TROLL! I tried to run away but I tripped over a rock and fell into a river. When I stood up I turned around I saw the troll running after me. I ran all the way home and never saw the troll ever again. spiderman
I saw something in the distance but what was it I thought. I ran. finally i reached home. but i still did not now what kind of beast was chasing me.
LOVE REECE
I was walking in the woods and suddenly i heard a THUMP. I did not know what the noise was. then right before my eyes i saw a mean troll!
I was walking in the woods and suddenly... I saw green thing POP out of behind a tree then i ran home love.b.s.
i was walking through the woods suninley i turnd invisible MUSKILER BAER WAS HUNTING ME i screached AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WAS HORAFIED !!!!!!!!l
a baby big black bear jumped on me but he fell off. to me i thought he wanted to be my pet. so picked him up on my back. i named Blackly. i went home. but when i got my mom yelled GET HIM OUT OF HERE!!! my dad herd it he thought an animal was attacking her. so he brought his machine gun out and started shooting the celling. luckily he wasted his bullets. and he was safe. i ran upstairs i jumped in my bed put the blankets over me and went to sleep. but i was fake sleeping. i got out of bed snuck downstairs and played webkinz on the computer with Blackly. inky dinky
I saw a gigantic tiger. It to tried pounce on me but I dodged. It tried again. This time it got me. then I found out it was lonely that was why it wanted me. then I told my mother the story. Nicky Sticky
I was walking in the woods and suddenly I heard a loud whiny up in the sky. I looked up and saw a pegasus.She had pink, purple, black, blue and white patches on her musculer body."She's beatiful,"I thought. "I wish she would just come down here so I could have this graceful pegasus.But what should I name her?" Then I thought and thought. Then I felt something nuge me while I was thinking. I looked up and saw the pegasus just when I thought of a name. "I know what to wait, I forgot to ask you, do you want to come be my pet?",I asked the pegasus. She tossed her head and neighed."I'll take that as a yes,Starlight!"
Camague
i was going on a hike suddenly i saw
Bigfoot.i ran as fast as i could go.
finely i lost Bigfoot and after a few minutes i got home.
Darth Vader
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